Sandbox Article Critique
A place to get critique on sandboxed articles.
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by: 10 Nov 2018 18:51 |
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by: 12 Nov 2018 11:59 |
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by: 11 Aug 2018 02:06 |
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Short and Sweet
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by: 23 Oct 2018 09:58 |
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Mummified monkeys. Supp is in progress. Please tell me if my concept is shit so if it is I don't have to write the supp.
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by: 22 Aug 2018 19:55 |
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Simple and sweet, hopefully!
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by: 16 Sep 2018 21:27 |
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Spidermoths that cause you to live your entire life in one dream, then to live it again
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by: 23 Aug 2018 20:33 |
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Spoopy Stone Disks
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by: 05 Sep 2018 02:27 |
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Some faerie hijinx ensue
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by: 08 Sep 2018 04:59 |
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Possibly the most horrifying cryptid
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by: 20 Aug 2018 19:36 |
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This post is closed. Do not respond. The article has already been posted to the main page.
- Dev
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by: 12 Aug 2018 20:54 |
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Sandbox posted below
Aboriginal spectres of unknown origin which wander their regions of origin in paths correlating to the layout of the land at the time of death. Spectres will phase through new natural features in their path but will destroy any new man made materials they come in contact with.
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by: 15 Aug 2018 17:43 |
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It's essentially a glove that turns you into a ghost while wearing it, but with a few drawbacks. It'd likely be useful for inflicting harm on spectral aberrations. It's still got room to grow, and I'll likely add to it every now and then, including any use it sees in hunting other aberrations.
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by: 19 Aug 2018 23:34 |
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This article has been accepted and is awaiting posting by the author.
- Dev
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by: 20 Aug 2018 07:52 |
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by: 16 Aug 2018 15:37 |
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by: 10 Aug 2018 04:35 |
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Article already on the main list. Don't reply. -Eon
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by: 12 Aug 2018 06:30 |
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by: 09 Aug 2018 21:32 |
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Do not reply. -Eon
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by: 11 Aug 2018 08:05 |
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