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by: Carnivore CantaloupeCarnivore Cantaloupe
03 Aug 2018 18:28
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Phone-line ghosts
by: SonKingKongSonKingKong
19 Feb 2019 10:08
4 by NagirosNagiros
19 Feb 2019 17:26 Jump!
Unexplained beams of light that act like lasers in the forest.
by: SonKingKongSonKingKong
15 Feb 2019 22:33
5 by SonKingKongSonKingKong
19 Feb 2019 06:02 Jump!
A former Warder is disgruntled at the secrets.
by: SonKingKongSonKingKong
15 Feb 2019 22:36
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Charms of the Dharmic fates allowing for minor super powers and warding.
by: SonKingKongSonKingKong
10 Feb 2019 04:35
2 by google_chromegoogle_chrome
10 Feb 2019 21:52 Jump!
This is an improved version of the Evie Walker article. Hopefully this is a noticeable improvement.
by: google_chromegoogle_chrome
10 Feb 2019 20:15
2 by SonKingKongSonKingKong
10 Feb 2019 21:43 Jump!
A Monster Among Microbs
by: War Time BuckleyWar Time Buckley
06 Feb 2019 00:22
2 by SonKingKongSonKingKong
06 Feb 2019 11:02 Jump!
This is my first attempt to actually embrace the wayward style of writing. As this article is exclusively written from the first person of a single warder. I hope that I did well here.
by: google_chromegoogle_chrome
05 Feb 2019 19:27
2 by SonKingKongSonKingKong
06 Feb 2019 08:10 Jump!
A rework of the Bahane article.
by: SonKingKongSonKingKong
05 Feb 2019 07:06
2 by google_chromegoogle_chrome
05 Feb 2019 20:08 Jump!
by: RedtideRedtide
01 Feb 2019 01:19
2 by SonKingKongSonKingKong
02 Feb 2019 08:03 Jump!
Sentient flaming full plate armor
by: google_chromegoogle_chrome
26 Jan 2019 01:10
4 by SonKingKongSonKingKong
29 Jan 2019 10:52 Jump!
A carnivorous forest that impales victims and infects them with spores to reproduce.
by: Enderborn_7thEnderborn_7th
03 Jan 2019 01:31
7 by SonKingKongSonKingKong
29 Jan 2019 10:08 Jump!
A format skew article.
by: NagirosNagiros
08 Jan 2019 15:49
2 by SonKingKongSonKingKong
09 Jan 2019 22:26 Jump!
A set of Warder outfits that specialize in pre-mission acquisition of information.
by: NagirosNagiros
04 Jan 2019 03:50
2 by SonKingKongSonKingKong
09 Jan 2019 21:48 Jump!
I made a catalog of every official outlet for the benefit of the author.
by: NagirosNagiros
04 Jan 2019 03:45
2 by SonKingKongSonKingKong
04 Jan 2019 06:09 Jump!
by: Carnivore CantaloupeCarnivore Cantaloupe
11 Dec 2018 04:23
2 by berstagerberstager
01 Jan 2019 12:14 Jump!
Giants arise from the forests and walk towards city centers. The Bureau deters them with aerial bombardment, torching the forests in the process and creating the California wildfire crisis.
by: NagirosNagiros
19 Dec 2018 01:25
4 by NagirosNagiros
26 Dec 2018 20:05 Jump!
The famed Chupacabra...with a twist involving the Cuban government and a possible Bureau conspiracy.
by: SonKingKongSonKingKong
24 Dec 2018 12:22
2 by NagirosNagiros
25 Dec 2018 21:45 Jump!
by: Einer von RabeEiner von Rabe
10 Nov 2018 18:51
5 by Einer von RabeEiner von Rabe
15 Nov 2018 16:31 Jump!
by: Carnivore CantaloupeCarnivore Cantaloupe
12 Nov 2018 11:59
4 by berstagerberstager
15 Nov 2018 06:20 Jump!
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