Sandbox Article Critique
A place to get critique on sandboxed articles.
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by: 03 Aug 2018 18:28 |
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Phone-line ghosts
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by: 19 Feb 2019 10:08 |
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Unexplained beams of light that act like lasers in the forest.
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by: 15 Feb 2019 22:33 |
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A former Warder is disgruntled at the secrets.
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by: 15 Feb 2019 22:36 |
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Charms of the Dharmic fates allowing for minor super powers and warding.
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by: 10 Feb 2019 04:35 |
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This is an improved version of the Evie Walker article. Hopefully this is a noticeable improvement.
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by: 10 Feb 2019 20:15 |
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A Monster Among Microbs
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by: 06 Feb 2019 00:22 |
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This is my first attempt to actually embrace the wayward style of writing. As this article is exclusively written from the first person of a single warder. I hope that I did well here.
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by: 05 Feb 2019 19:27 |
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A rework of the Bahane article.
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by: 05 Feb 2019 07:06 |
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by: 01 Feb 2019 01:19 |
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Sentient flaming full plate armor
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by: 26 Jan 2019 01:10 |
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A carnivorous forest that impales victims and infects them with spores to reproduce.
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by: 03 Jan 2019 01:31 |
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A format skew article.
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by: 08 Jan 2019 15:49 |
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A set of Warder outfits that specialize in pre-mission acquisition of information.
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by: 04 Jan 2019 03:50 |
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I made a catalog of every official outlet for the benefit of the author.
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by: 04 Jan 2019 03:45 |
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by: 11 Dec 2018 04:23 |
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Giants arise from the forests and walk towards city centers. The Bureau deters them with aerial bombardment, torching the forests in the process and creating the California wildfire crisis.
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by: 19 Dec 2018 01:25 |
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The famed Chupacabra...with a twist involving the Cuban government and a possible Bureau conspiracy.
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by: 24 Dec 2018 12:22 |
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by: 10 Nov 2018 18:51 |
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by: 12 Nov 2018 11:59 |
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