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by: Carnivore CantaloupeCarnivore Cantaloupe
03 Aug 2018 18:28
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by: Einer von RabeEiner von Rabe
10 Nov 2018 18:51
5 by Einer von RabeEiner von Rabe
15 Nov 2018 16:31 Jump!
by: Carnivore CantaloupeCarnivore Cantaloupe
12 Nov 2018 11:59
4 by berstagerberstager
15 Nov 2018 06:20 Jump!
by: Eon ApocalypseEon Apocalypse
11 Aug 2018 02:06
10 by Hot SpringsHot Springs
03 Nov 2018 00:51 Jump!
Short and Sweet
by: Hot SpringsHot Springs
23 Oct 2018 09:58
3 by SonKingKongSonKingKong
02 Nov 2018 04:34 Jump!
Mummified monkeys. Supp is in progress. Please tell me if my concept is shit so if it is I don't have to write the supp.
by: openupthetrunkopenupthetrunk
22 Aug 2018 19:55
5 by Hot SpringsHot Springs
22 Oct 2018 02:59 Jump!
Simple and sweet, hopefully!
by: MrBazzleMrBazzle
16 Sep 2018 21:27
4 by openupthetrunkopenupthetrunk
17 Oct 2018 01:40 Jump!
Spidermoths that cause you to live your entire life in one dream, then to live it again
by: Hot SpringsHot Springs
23 Aug 2018 20:33
2 by SonKingKongSonKingKong
27 Sep 2018 04:49 Jump!
Spoopy Stone Disks
by: Carnivore CantaloupeCarnivore Cantaloupe
05 Sep 2018 02:27
3 by Hot SpringsHot Springs
14 Sep 2018 01:16 Jump!
Some faerie hijinx ensue
by: SonKingKongSonKingKong
08 Sep 2018 04:59
3 by non_foundnon_found
10 Sep 2018 21:57 Jump!
Possibly the most horrifying cryptid
by: Hot SpringsHot Springs
20 Aug 2018 19:36
4 by SonKingKongSonKingKong
07 Sep 2018 09:22 Jump!
This post is closed. Do not respond. The article has already been posted to the main page. - Dev
by: trettertretter
12 Aug 2018 20:54
9 by Carnivore CantaloupeCarnivore Cantaloupe
25 Aug 2018 19:57 Jump!
Sandbox posted below Aboriginal spectres of unknown origin which wander their regions of origin in paths correlating to the layout of the land at the time of death. Spectres will phase through new natural features in their path but will destroy any new man made materials they come in contact with.
by: Nov3mberNov3mber
15 Aug 2018 17:43
5 by Nov3mberNov3mber
22 Aug 2018 15:01 Jump!
It's essentially a glove that turns you into a ghost while wearing it, but with a few drawbacks. It'd likely be useful for inflicting harm on spectral aberrations. It's still got room to grow, and I'll likely add to it every now and then, including any use it sees in hunting other aberrations.
by: SalikaSalika
19 Aug 2018 23:34
5 by openupthetrunkopenupthetrunk
22 Aug 2018 14:05 Jump!
This article has been accepted and is awaiting posting by the author. - Dev
by: Dizzy_SudsDizzy_Suds
20 Aug 2018 07:52
4 by openupthetrunkopenupthetrunk
22 Aug 2018 09:40 Jump!
by: Carnivore CantaloupeCarnivore Cantaloupe
16 Aug 2018 15:37
4 by openupthetrunkopenupthetrunk
19 Aug 2018 01:54 Jump!
by: openupthetrunkopenupthetrunk
10 Aug 2018 04:35
4 by Nov3mberNov3mber
17 Aug 2018 12:38 Jump!
Article already on the main list. Don't reply. -Eon
by: AscriberAscriber
12 Aug 2018 06:30
3 by AscriberAscriber
13 Aug 2018 03:38 Jump!
by: ASealIGuessASealIGuess
09 Aug 2018 21:32
4 by VarroRVarroR
13 Aug 2018 02:33 Jump!
Do not reply. -Eon
by: openupthetrunkopenupthetrunk
11 Aug 2018 08:05
5 by Eon ApocalypseEon Apocalypse
13 Aug 2018 00:35 Jump!
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